That's an amazing scan, and it looks great. Very nice work.
One thing to note, though, is that there are too many stars in the background.
It gets a little repetitive, especially since most of them look identical. I
think that erasing some more of them would make it look better and more
realistic.
The edges of the mountins in the background look kind of odd, as does the tree
being over the girl. I think it'd work better if the branches were all behind
her. Also, in some places, there's a little white outline on the scan.
Other than that, I think it looks great. Good work.
I like the colors in the background. They're nicely blurred and work well
together. The scan looks a little grainy though (easily fixed by duplicating
the layer, setting the top layer to overlay, and maybe a smart blur on the
bottom layer). Also, some of the edges around the scan look jagged. Other than
that, it looks good.
The abstract background looks cool. I'm undecided on whether or not the text is
extraneous...if it stays, though, the second line should be centered. As for
the screenshots, you should've used the manga design rather than the anime one.
Neji's seal in the manga looks way better than the giant X. ;;;
i believe the emblem in the middle is a fleur-de-lis, and originated in France.
The wall is indeed very...orange. The leaves in the scan look out of place; I
think you could've covered them up with the smudge tool. The background looks
interesting, with the dashed lines and various abstract things, but I don't feel
like it matches the scan. It seems to me that the text is extraneous too.
Interesting looking scan, and the blood splattered across it looks good, if a
little flat. I don't really like the rest of the wall, though. The background
doesn't seem to match the style of the scan. The brick walls look too
artificial, and it's jarring where they meet the floor. Same with the sky.
I really like the color of the wall. The red looks really great. The scan
looks pretty good too. My only complaint about that is that in some places,
particularly on the strands of hair, the lines look jagged. Some spots in the
background look odd too. For example, above and to the right of her head,
there're some weird looking patches. Finally, the tree looks too transparent
when it's over the moon.
I really like the serene feeling of the wall. Very soothing. The text effect
looks nice, and the little moon is a nice touch (and as mentioned, 'eternity' is
misspelled).
Some complaints: there are way too many stars. The light around the horizon,
especially in the lower left area, leads me to believe that it is, at the very
least, close to dawn/dusk. Nowhere near that many stars should be seen, and the
colors in the sky should reflect that as well, more than just the dull glow you
have now. Maybe half as many stars as are there now should be visible, and I
think that's pushing it. They're also too bright near the horizon.
The water looks flat. It needs more noticeable waves. The grass needs more
layers to give it a more organic feeling; right now, it looks really artificial.
Adding some more grass inbetween the existing layers would make it look more
like a field. Finally, there's something...odd about the scan. I can't quite
put my finger on it. It's cute and all, but looks a little grainy or something.
Kind of indistinct. The style doesn't quite match the grass or the stars,
which are very sharp.
I've totally got this pic in wallscroll form hanging in my room. <3 Haibane
Renmei.
As for the wall, I think it looks pretty nice. The colors look good, and the
blurring is a nice effect. There're some spots that are too sharp, though,
particularly in the left half of the wall. Also, her hair in the lower right
area (below her chin) is too sharp as well, which makes it look like a sloppy
extraction. Other than that, it looks good.
I like the largely black and white background. It makes the scan stand out
nicely. Her wings look kind of funky, though, mainly because one of them is
over an almost pure black background while the other is over a mostly white
background. Even though they're the same opacity, the one over the white tomb
looks more transparent than the one over the sky. Also, her hair looks too flat
and straight. Other than that, it looks good. Very nice work.
Looks...interesting. I like the effect on the border and on the sand. The
colors on the scan could be a little more vibrant, though. And the color of her
left eye is kinda funky. Also, the sand dune is a little too dark, IMO. Some
more sand and a little less black would've been nice.
The scan works well with the background, and her blonde hair is a good contrast
with the overwhelmingly blue background. The wings of light effect looks great
too. It doesn't look so cluttered that it's distracting, because most of the
effects are firmly in the background. My only complaint is that the crystal
things look odd and kinda out of place. Other than that, it's a very nice wall.
I like the atmosphere the wall has. Nice, peaceful scene. However, the
lighting on Link doesn't seem quite right. The light is coming from behind him,
but his face is lit up, which looks weird.
Good color work. It gives the whole wall a kind of dream-like feeling, which is
fitting considering the characters are asleep.
Couple of minor complaints: the text is a little hard to to read. If there were
a little more contrast, that'd be great. Also, the feathers floating around are
a bit much, I think. The flowers around the frame of the wall are enough; the
feathers just look out of place.
And I know this isn't your work, but what the heck is that
mouse...monkey...thing in her arms?
Interesting. I like the pic, and the stuff in the background looks pretty good.
I'd put it behind the scan, though, rather than over it. Also, the entire
thing looks kinda low quality. Other than that, good work.
Pretty good wall. The scan is nicely extracted. I'd suggest fixing up the star
field a bit. As it is, there're too many stars and not enough space, which
makes it feel artificial. Also, the really bright stars are too big; plus, if
they are that bright, they should drown out the stars around them. Other than
that, good job.
Mm, not bad. The extraction could've been a bit better, though - the colors on
the big scan look a little grainy, and the edges are a bit jagged. Also, I
don't like the kinda brownish colored part in the background. It makes me feel
like there's too much going on in the wall, with each girl represented three
times. I'd prefer just having a nice sky or scenery background to go along with
the girls in the foreground, with the shots of each one along the side. And
Natsuki's pic being a different side than Mai's and Mikoto's is
kinda...odd.
i like the background. The color suits the character well, and I really like
the effect of the lines going across the sakura. The blossoms that wander out
over her are a nice touch. For improvement, I'd suggest cleaning up the scan a
little more. Compared with the background, the scan looks kind of flat and
lifeless. A quick fix for that is just to duplicate the layer with the scan and
set the duplicate layer to overlay. It'll bring out the colors of the scan
more, and it'll look brighter and cleaner. Maybe a smart blur on the original
layer too.
A pretty good wall. I don't really like the colored line pattern behind the
text. The background looks pretty nice, even though the tech theme (the binary
and such) don't seem to match the character. The colors on the scan could have
been a little brighter as well. Other than that, good work.
Wow. I mean...just...wow. I honestly just have no criticism for
this wall. It's absolutely beautiful. The scan is blended wonderfully with the
background, and they really complement each other. The abstract feel of the
background really enhances the pic of Vincent. It all works great.
I like the color work, though I feel that the sense of her being out of place
would've been enhanced if the background was pure black and white, with Lain in
color. That's just my feeling, though. I do like how her white clothes make
her stand out from the darker background. I don't really like the picture in
the lower right corner, or the large amount of blank space on the right.
Overall, it's a pretty good work.
That's an amazing scan, and it looks great. Very nice work.
One thing to note, though, is that there are too many stars in the background. It gets a little repetitive, especially since most of them look identical. I think that erasing some more of them would make it look better and more realistic.
O_O
Wow...um...that's quite risque...
I like the character, though. Purple eyes are interesting.
The girl is very cute. ^_^
The edges of the mountins in the background look kind of odd, as does the tree being over the girl. I think it'd work better if the branches were all behind her. Also, in some places, there's a little white outline on the scan.
Other than that, I think it looks great. Good work.
I like the colors in the background. They're nicely blurred and work well together. The scan looks a little grainy though (easily fixed by duplicating the layer, setting the top layer to overlay, and maybe a smart blur on the bottom layer). Also, some of the edges around the scan look jagged. Other than that, it looks good.
The abstract background looks cool. I'm undecided on whether or not the text is extraneous...if it stays, though, the second line should be centered. As for the screenshots, you should've used the manga design rather than the anime one. Neji's seal in the manga looks way better than the giant X.
;;;
i believe the emblem in the middle is a fleur-de-lis, and originated in France.
The wall is indeed very...orange. The leaves in the scan look out of place; I think you could've covered them up with the smudge tool. The background looks interesting, with the dashed lines and various abstract things, but I don't feel like it matches the scan. It seems to me that the text is extraneous too.
Interesting looking scan, and the blood splattered across it looks good, if a little flat. I don't really like the rest of the wall, though. The background doesn't seem to match the style of the scan. The brick walls look too artificial, and it's jarring where they meet the floor. Same with the sky.
I really like the color of the wall. The red looks really great. The scan looks pretty good too. My only complaint about that is that in some places, particularly on the strands of hair, the lines look jagged. Some spots in the background look odd too. For example, above and to the right of her head, there're some weird looking patches. Finally, the tree looks too transparent when it's over the moon.
Other than that, it's a good looking wall.
I really like the serene feeling of the wall. Very soothing. The text effect looks nice, and the little moon is a nice touch (and as mentioned, 'eternity' is misspelled).
Some complaints: there are way too many stars. The light around the horizon, especially in the lower left area, leads me to believe that it is, at the very least, close to dawn/dusk. Nowhere near that many stars should be seen, and the colors in the sky should reflect that as well, more than just the dull glow you have now. Maybe half as many stars as are there now should be visible, and I think that's pushing it. They're also too bright near the horizon.
The water looks flat. It needs more noticeable waves. The grass needs more layers to give it a more organic feeling; right now, it looks really artificial. Adding some more grass inbetween the existing layers would make it look more like a field. Finally, there's something...odd about the scan. I can't quite put my finger on it. It's cute and all, but looks a little grainy or something. Kind of indistinct. The style doesn't quite match the grass or the stars, which are very sharp.
I've totally got this pic in wallscroll form hanging in my room. <3 Haibane Renmei.
As for the wall, I think it looks pretty nice. The colors look good, and the blurring is a nice effect. There're some spots that are too sharp, though, particularly in the left half of the wall. Also, her hair in the lower right area (below her chin) is too sharp as well, which makes it look like a sloppy extraction. Other than that, it looks good.
I like the largely black and white background. It makes the scan stand out nicely. Her wings look kind of funky, though, mainly because one of them is over an almost pure black background while the other is over a mostly white background. Even though they're the same opacity, the one over the white tomb looks more transparent than the one over the sky. Also, her hair looks too flat and straight. Other than that, it looks good. Very nice work.
Looks...interesting. I like the effect on the border and on the sand. The colors on the scan could be a little more vibrant, though. And the color of her left eye is kinda funky. Also, the sand dune is a little too dark, IMO. Some more sand and a little less black would've been nice.
I like it. ^_^
The scan works well with the background, and her blonde hair is a good contrast with the overwhelmingly blue background. The wings of light effect looks great too. It doesn't look so cluttered that it's distracting, because most of the effects are firmly in the background. My only complaint is that the crystal things look odd and kinda out of place. Other than that, it's a very nice wall.
I like the atmosphere the wall has. Nice, peaceful scene. However, the lighting on Link doesn't seem quite right. The light is coming from behind him, but his face is lit up, which looks weird.
...is she gagged?
...I have to wonder about how appropriate that is...
Good color work. It gives the whole wall a kind of dream-like feeling, which is fitting considering the characters are asleep.
Couple of minor complaints: the text is a little hard to to read. If there were a little more contrast, that'd be great. Also, the feathers floating around are a bit much, I think. The flowers around the frame of the wall are enough; the feathers just look out of place.
And I know this isn't your work, but what the heck is that mouse...monkey...thing in her arms?
!! Hi Nu!
You picked an awesome gundam to wall, but the actual wall looks kinda plain. It'd be nice if you did more with the background.
Interesting. I like the pic, and the stuff in the background looks pretty good. I'd put it behind the scan, though, rather than over it. Also, the entire thing looks kinda low quality. Other than that, good work.
Pretty good wall. The scan is nicely extracted. I'd suggest fixing up the star field a bit. As it is, there're too many stars and not enough space, which makes it feel artificial. Also, the really bright stars are too big; plus, if they are that bright, they should drown out the stars around them. Other than that, good job.
Mm, not bad. The extraction could've been a bit better, though - the colors on the big scan look a little grainy, and the edges are a bit jagged. Also, I don't like the kinda brownish colored part in the background. It makes me feel like there's too much going on in the wall, with each girl represented three times. I'd prefer just having a nice sky or scenery background to go along with the girls in the foreground, with the shots of each one along the side. And Natsuki's pic being a different side than Mai's and Mikoto's is kinda...odd.
Other than that, good job.
Mm, nice work for your first wall.
i like the background. The color suits the character well, and I really like the effect of the lines going across the sakura. The blossoms that wander out over her are a nice touch. For improvement, I'd suggest cleaning up the scan a little more. Compared with the background, the scan looks kind of flat and lifeless. A quick fix for that is just to duplicate the layer with the scan and set the duplicate layer to overlay. It'll bring out the colors of the scan more, and it'll look brighter and cleaner. Maybe a smart blur on the original layer too.
<3 Sanji. He's awesome.
A pretty good wall. I don't really like the colored line pattern behind the text. The background looks pretty nice, even though the tech theme (the binary and such) don't seem to match the character. The colors on the scan could have been a little brighter as well. Other than that, good work.
Wow. I mean...just...wow. I honestly just have no criticism for this wall. It's absolutely beautiful. The scan is blended wonderfully with the background, and they really complement each other. The abstract feel of the background really enhances the pic of Vincent. It all works great.
I like the color work, though I feel that the sense of her being out of place would've been enhanced if the background was pure black and white, with Lain in color. That's just my feeling, though. I do like how her white clothes make her stand out from the darker background. I don't really like the picture in the lower right corner, or the large amount of blank space on the right. Overall, it's a pretty good work.